EDELINE

this is the story that i wrote based on a video that a person made.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbP6D1qPk5Q <== the link to the vid. i do not own the story but i just change it a little bit...The story start somewhere in Munchen (Munich) in Germany, when the son of ambassador Klaus; Lothar fell in love with Maganhildi, a beautiful daughter of ambassador Manfred. She was very lady like; she had a nice red hair and enchanting green eyes. Maganhildi too, fell in love with Lothar; he’s handsome with his black locks of hair and very masculine. It’s not long after that they got married; they live in a mansion with maids and a large garden. After a while Maganhildi got pregnant and gave birth to a baby boy they name him Emil. Emil was very bright and funny, he can touch anyone’s heart with his smile. He’s very handsome with his locks of black hair and a pair of green eyes. He had a flawless complexion. Four years after the birth of Emil, Maganhildi once again pregnant but this time she got complications she gave birth to a baby girl. She named her Edeline; she kissed the baby girl and exhaled her last breath. Lothar, Emil and all the maids were very sad. Edeline isn’t very pretty she was the opposite of her brother. She is very quiet little girl and seldom smile. The person who can make her smile is Emil.

“Master Emil, Mistress Edeline your breakfast is served” one of the maid; Martina called. They both seated on the chair in the dining room “guten morgen, Edeline” her brother greeted “guten morgen, Emil” she smiled at his brother. Another two maids appeared Amalia and Elena served them food “danke” the both replied “Elena, where’s papa?” Emil Asked Elena shook her head then Emil turned to Edeline “Edeline I just learn a new song from Anton it’s called Lilium” Anton is Emil’s personal music teacher he teaches any kind of instrument “I would love to hear it” Edeline eyes lit up. Edeline is fourteen meaning that Emil is eighteen and the potential of him getting married is getting bigger deep down, she would always dream to always be close to Emil. Forever.

They both finish their breakfast and Edeline followed Emil to the hall situated in the centre of the mansion. Ceremonies are done here. Emil approach the Organ and start playing ‘Lilium’, Edeline stood behind him as Emil played heartedly. His song touches her heart. Tears drop down from her eyes, Emil overheard her sobs “what’s wrong Edeline?” he hurried to comfort her. Edeline hug him “I’m afraid that you would go away” she sobs Emil hugs her “remember I am the one who invented ‘ich liebe meine schwester’, I won’t ever leave you”. At night time Edeline always watch his brother read his book by the fireplace she would just watch him for hours. Behind the wall.

“Edeline, why aren’t you sleeping? It’s late” Emil accidentally found her. Edeline search for answers “I wanted to hear a song before I go to bed” she begged Emil and holds his hand. Emil smiled “ok, but promise me you will go to bed after this” he uses his brotherly tone and Edeline quickly nod “Promise!” Edeline sat on the floor near the Fireplace as Emil played her the piece of Amazing Grace on the wooden grand piano.

Lothar is watching them from a far and he got an idea. The next night before dinner they received guests. Lothar’s friend, Ambassador Andreas and his daughter Carolina. A young businessman named Kass. They arrived as Edeline sat on the floor listening to Emil’s piano pieces. Martina hurried to them when she saw a carriage approaching “mistress Edeline! Master Emil! We have guest!” Martina is thrilled but Edeline wasn’t thrilled at all. She rushed to the large window and saw the butler; Torsten had already opened the door. He invited them in, “Emil!” Edeline called but there was no answer.

“Emil?” she called again and turned back. Emil wasn’t there he was already downstairs greeting the visitors. Edeline is unpleased but she too, went downstairs and met Carolina and Kass. Carolina is very pretty, her complexion is flawless and she has a wavy golden hair. She saw the way Emil looked at her and she could not hate Carolina more. As Edeline was watching Carolina and Emil talk, Kass is watching her with an unusual thoughts running through his mind. At dinner Emil didn’t notice Edeline at all “ich liebe meine schwester, ich liebe meine schwester” she reminded of the words that Emil told her so many times since she was very, very young in her head.

Emil and Carolina was laughing away after dinner. Edeline excuse herself without even smiled, she left everyone and went upstairs and approach the balcony. She cries her heart out and didn’t notice Kass was behind her watching with his unusual eyes and smiled. Edeline look down and caught a scene that broke her heart that instant. Emil and Carolina was kissing in the garden, her jaw was wide open. She ran away into her room and kept thinking of a way to get Emil back. Late at night Emil was taking his lukewarm bath. Edeline watch him and out of the blue, she took off her clothes and get into the old tub. Emil was not in shock, he got used to it as they always took bath together.

“Emil” Edeline softly said her brother’s name. “yes.” He replied short. “Do you like Carolina?” he smiled and breaks a laugh “what an unusual question. Yes, I might have liked her. Why?” Emil asked her “well I don’t really like her, I think she is breaking us up” she confessed Emil shook his head “nonsense” Edeline start to be serious “yes, I bet she’s plotting a plan right now” Emil looked at her like never before; anger and rage fills his heart “don’t talk like that about people, Edeline. Especially about Carolina, She’s a nice girl.” Emil tried to keep his cool “no! She is not nice!” Her tone was high and it’s the first time Emil Slap her. “You should learn some manners, Edeline!” Emil got out of the tub and left her alone “gute nich” he said and walk away. Edeline sob alone for the very first time.

The next day, Amalia and Elena dress Edeline up as usual was surprised by her puffy eyes and a bruise on her apple cheek. They dress up anyway until Martina came to informed that she had a guest. She went downstairs and found Kass with Lothar, talking. Nodding. Smiling. “What is it, papa?” Lothar saw his daughter’s face, it was puffy and a bruise on her apple cheek. “What’s the matter with you, tochter?” he asked worried. “Oh this, I bump into drawer while looking for something and I couldn’t sleep well because of the pain” she lied. Lothar nodded “well Edeline, this is Kass you met him last night” Kass bowed. Edeline look at him without any expression. “Kass was telling me about how he felt about you and he wanted to propose to you. I mean you are turning fifteen. She was shock and all she could think of is Emil and her brother is nowhere to be found.

She didn’t want to disappoint her father and Emil was nowhere to save her. She accepted. Kass smiled his evil smile. Not long after that, Edeline was already in her gown. Her bruise is still clear. The thought of marrying Kass hurts her. She cried. There was a knock on the door. Martina opened it for her. It was Emil, she hug her brother and sobbed. Emil kissed her on the forehead and replies her hug. “I’m sorry dear Edeline. I was too harsh on you. Kass is a nice man he will take care of you like I used to” he kissed her again. “Ich liebe meine schwester” he reminded her. Emil walks Edeline down the aisle. After she got married to Kass she moved to Zurich with Kass. And she heard Carolina and Emil got married.

She sat beside the telephone, sobbing. “Cry, cry, cry? Do you have anything to do?” Kass look at her disgusted. “I’m waiting for Emil to call” she sobbed “Emil this, Emil that. You are my wife now, do as I say! Now get up!” Kass yelled. Edeline stood. Kass punched her in the face and laughed. “That’s more like it” he laughed. A year passed Emil seldom called and one fated day the telephone rang. Edeline answered “hello?” the voice of a telegraph woman can be heard at the end of the other line. Hello. Are u Mrs. Edeline daughter of ambassador Lothar?” she said. Edeline nodded “yes, I’m Edeline” “I will connect the line now” she said and a man’s voice can be heard.

“Guten tag, Edeline” she could recognize the voice. “Guten tag, Emil” she almost cried. “I have great news for you. Carolina has given birth to a baby girl, we named her Kerry, and now you’re an aunt. Isn’t that great?” the news have given Edeline a shock. She couldn’t stop herself and cried. “I’m so happy” she lied. At that moment Kass is home. He got mad at Edeline just because his business didn’t turn out well and he slaps Edeline. Edeline face was bruised all over and couldn’t care about it anymore. Years actually passed and Kerry had grown in to a toddler. Edeline is stuck with the man who abused her. Who couldn’t help it but remember Emil each day and the memories. Ich liebe meine schwester.

Kass has a business trip in Munich and Edeline followed him although they got into a fight. Edeline still wanted to meet Emil. Edeline went to her old mansion but it wasn’t the same with Carolina and Kerry around. Emil didn’t spend time with her much, he prefer his new family rather than the old one. Another day had passed Edeline couldn’t help herself and kiss Emil on his lips. He pushes her and wanted to kick her out. But he didn’t have the heart to. Everyday Edeline would be quieter. She sat beside the fireplace like she use to and Kerry stand too close to her. “Tante Edeline, why do u look so sad?” without Edeline notice she killed Kerry with her own hands and didn’t feel regret about it. Emil was heartbroken and Kass went to talk to him. “You know Edeline had this kind of problem since she was small right?” Emil shook his head “I didn’t know it could turn out like this” he sighed. “I live with her long enough to know her, she abused herself I tried to stop her.” He stops halfway.

The next day, Kass tell her that they should go back to Zurich. Surprisingly she didn’t object. Carolina didn’t see her off as she hated her for killing her only child. Only Emil had seen her off but inside the mansion. He could never forgive her but she was her beloved sister after all. On the way to Zurich, Edeline got a fight with Kass because Edeline said that she didn’t want to be with him anymore. He knocks her on the ground. Edeline’s head accidentally knocked a stop and she died on the spot. Kass left her and went back to Zurich alone. Someone found the body and informed Emil. Ich liebe meine schwester, Edeline.

well it's not that good sorry if you're not enjoying it...